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here, at the bottom - lovers.
there are lovers disassembling
themselves
      lost in and to the
      desperate motion in
      of - waves.

- did you think the continents
moved themselves? see them slip,

in an open sleep. less go, come.
come and, and - again. trembling


here, at the bottom - their eyes
are lightless. hollow bodies left
restless,

          the sea does not sleep.
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Liquid City by ~Is-lnds is a gorgeous display of poetry crafted on an emotional level between unsettled silence and restlessness. ( Featured by ^NicSwaner )
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=vvolatile Feb 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh my god I don't know how I didn't see this until now! congrats on the DD wes, teheh. :heart: you definitely deserve it
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:iconis-lnds:
haha
thank you bay :heart:

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=vvolatile Feb 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
you're welcome c:
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~greenleo94 Feb 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Gorgeous. I especially like: "in an open sleep. less go, come. / come and, and - again. trembling" The beat is fantastic, and I love your phrasing. <3
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:iconis-lnds:
thank you! you're lovely.

your comment made my night. im happy you're satisfied with beat and diction - i thought it was simple, maybe too simple. but it seems to work!

:)
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~greenleo94 Feb 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aw. :3 Thanks.

Glad to hear! :D Your piece deserves stuff like that. It's simple, but that gives it a stark, pounding quality. Sort of like the ocean. It works perfectly.
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:icontravelgirlxx:
You've been featured: [link]

Keep up the fabulous work!!
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:iconis-lnds:
haha i'll try
and thank you!
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